Comments on: The Bit With The Excerpt http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/ Crazy. But True. Sat, 22 Nov 2008 05:39:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Vixx http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/#comment-5529 Vixx Fri, 02 May 2008 20:22:07 +0000 http://furious-angel.com/?p=1551#comment-5529 Sharon: My bad. Thanks. :) *hugs* Teesee: No - thank you! Thanks so much for responding. I'm chuffed you liked it! V xx Sharon: My bad. Thanks. :) *hugs*

Teesee: No - thank you! Thanks so much for responding. I’m chuffed you liked it!

V xx

]]> By: sharon http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/#comment-5527 sharon Fri, 02 May 2008 14:02:42 +0000 http://furious-angel.com/?p=1551#comment-5527 See? I told you it was good :) *goes away feeling smug* See? I told you it was good :)

*goes away feeling smug*

]]> By: Teesee http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/#comment-5526 Teesee Thu, 01 May 2008 21:24:01 +0000 http://furious-angel.com/?p=1551#comment-5526 Ok I finally found some time to read the excerpt. Wow. You really have a knack for dialogue. And for converying emotions in actions, a look, a thought. I really warmed to Will and Charlie, even though I wanted to slap her and shout "Don't let him go!" The sentences were quite long but I felt it worked by drawing out the scene of them breaking up. Oh and what happened last night? I want to know! I love reading inner dialogue, I find it helps me understand more about the character than any narrtor could tell me. So lots more of that please :) Thank you for sharing. Ok I finally found some time to read the excerpt. Wow. You really have a knack for dialogue. And for converying emotions in actions, a look, a thought. I really warmed to Will and Charlie, even though I wanted to slap her and shout “Don’t let him go!”

The sentences were quite long but I felt it worked by drawing out the scene of them breaking up. Oh and what happened last night? I want to know!

I love reading inner dialogue, I find it helps me understand more about the character than any narrtor could tell me. So lots more of that please :)

Thank you for sharing.

]]> By: Emz http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/#comment-5524 Emz Wed, 30 Apr 2008 21:56:56 +0000 http://furious-angel.com/?p=1551#comment-5524 You bet your butt you have! *grin* Only kiddin' with yer, wee little lass! Although it does make you wonder... if people have taken the time to a) ask for the password then b) downloaded it, why can't they c) give some fookin' (did she just <em>swear?!</em> feedback! And no, it's not a lot to ask before you say such a thing! It's damn right courtesy in my opinion! You've shared it with 'em - so they should share with you! C'mon guys and girlies... give her some love, eh? Else I'll set me wee little pixies on yer - ter feast on yer ear lobes! You bet your butt you have! *grin*

Only kiddin’ with yer, wee little lass!

Although it does make you wonder… if people have taken the time to a) ask for the password then b) downloaded it, why can’t they c) give some fookin’ (did she just swear?! feedback!

And no, it’s not a lot to ask before you say such a thing! It’s damn right courtesy in my opinion! You’ve shared it with ‘em - so they should share with you!

C’mon guys and girlies… give her some love, eh?

Else I’ll set me wee little pixies on yer - ter feast on yer ear lobes!

]]> By: Vixx http://furious-angel.com/2008/04/the-bit-with-the-excerpt/#comment-5523 Vixx Wed, 30 Apr 2008 19:56:43 +0000 http://furious-angel.com/?p=1551#comment-5523 I consider myself suitably chastised, Em . . . ;) V xx I consider myself suitably chastised, Em . . . ;)

V xx

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